I predict that in one or two weeks, my sentences in my novel will look like this:

His voice stiff and harsh with stiff harshness that sounded stiff and harsh. She didn’t like the stiff and harsh way he spoke; to her, it was too stiff and harsh and told her the harsh danger would soon come her way.

Word Count: 42

Hope that didn’t sound stiff or harsh.

11/01/2010 | jen |


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