Editors Needed!

At my school, my teacher is having us enter a writing contest, and thought that Portal would be my best editor. I will be having my friends and my teacher peer edit it, but they probably will just tell me how well written it was (I’m just kidding). But I would like somone who wouldn’t mind a giving a little “buildable” criticism. I really want to do my best, so I want an outsiders opinion on the character development, description, fluency, all that jazz. If you are interested palms up, just post a comment on why, and I will consider sending you an ultra secret copy of Portal.

This is only OPTIONAL you know.

11/19/2007 | ken |

Interested?

  1. I’d love to read and help edit… plus my mom’s a teacher so she’d be a great choice to edit. Send it over :)

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    Lisa
    Nov 19, 08:32 PM

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